http://dillon2270.edublogs.org I am here to spout opinions and reflections. Wed, 23 Aug 2006 04:32:58 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 http://dillon2270.edublogs.org/cover-letter/comment-page-1/#comment-215 Shirley Lumpkin Fri, 14 Jul 2006 15:19:48 +0000 http://dillon2270.edublogs.org/cover-letter/#comment-215 Dear Jason, You don't know me--I'm the invisible "fellow" in upstate New York. I found your cover letter really set up your portfolio for me, and I can't wait to read more. I was particularly struck by the changes in your writing of poetry, since lines from your poem "Where I'm From" really resonant with me as a reader of poetry: from "moonshine and mandolins" and "soldiers and peacemakers." Many of your word choices and lines in your poems resonante in that way with readers like me. Write on! Shirley Lumpkin Dear Jason,
You don’t know me–I’m the invisible “fellow” in upstate New York. I found your cover letter really set up your portfolio for me, and I can’t wait to read more. I was particularly struck by the changes in your writing of poetry, since lines from your poem “Where I’m From” really resonant with me as a reader of poetry: from “moonshine and mandolins” and “soldiers and peacemakers.” Many of your word choices and lines in your poems resonante in that way with readers like me. Write on! Shirley Lumpkin

]]> http://dillon2270.edublogs.org/cover-letter/comment-page-1/#comment-212 Peggy Fri, 14 Jul 2006 14:39:30 +0000 http://dillon2270.edublogs.org/cover-letter/#comment-212 I really like you honest evaluation that you often found it difficult in the past to hear people comment on your work. I am glad you have found the value in the experience this summer. Although it can be hard at times it really does help us to improve our writing. You are a very thoughtfull young man and are capable of such amazing things. I really like you honest evaluation that you often found it difficult in the past to hear people comment on your work. I am glad you have found the value in the experience this summer. Although it can be hard at times it really does help us to improve our writing. You are a very thoughtfull young man and are capable of such amazing things.

]]>